Friday, January 10, 2014

Laura’s Review of Storm (Storm MC, #1) by Nina Levine


If you loved Own the Wind (Chaos, #1) by Kristen Ashley, Reaper’s Property (Reapers MC, #1) by Joanna Wylde and Saving Dallas (Saving Dallas, #1) by Kim Jones then you will LOVE this book!!!!


Basic Summary
                                       
 Life can be a bitch but love can get you through any storm.
 
Madison Cole’s family is the Storm Motorcycle Club.  Her father is the President and her brother is the VP.  She grew up surrounded by bikers, crime and violence.  Two years ago she walked away from her family and the world they live in.  Her soul was shattered, her heart was broken, and she had an addiction she couldn't shake.  She picked up the pieces and put herself back together.  Now her family wants her back.  The club is being threatened and they send a club member to return her home to safety; the one person that could destroy everything she has worked so hard to build.

                Jason Reilly has sacrificed a lot for the motorcycle club he calls family.  Two years ago he made the biggest sacrifice of all; he gave up the woman he loved for them.  Now he is being sent to bring her back and he is conflicted.  He thought he was over her but discovers their connection is as strong as ever.  Their love was all-consuming, passionate and fiery.  It was also their undoing and he doesn't know if either of them is strong enough to battle the demos that ripped them apart to find love again.

                Madison and Jason are brought back together by a force out of their control; one that pushes them to a breaking point.  Can they overcome their past and discover a love worth fighting for or will the harsh reality of their world finally and completely break them both?


What I Love About This Book
                I really enjoyed this story line a lot.  I love motorcycle club books because they are usually very gritty and raw and have a way of showing the worst in people but also the very best.  Motorcycle clubs have a way of redefining family, and the Storm MC definitely falls into this category.  I really like Madison, I like that she isn't this innocent wide eyed girl discovering the world of bikers for the first time.  Storm MC was her life, and still is her life, and the fact that she’s an alcoholic that random sex with people makes her more real and relatable.  Not what I’m an alcoholic and have sex with random people…anymore (JK)!!   The sex scenes between these two are very steamy and sexy and I very much enjoyed reading them. 
               
                The actual plot line of the book is great, and there are a couple moments were I was on the edge of my seat dying to know what exactly was going to happen next.  Also definitely towards the end of the book you are thrown for a BIG loop, and I love books that have the ability to keep me guessing.  I love stories that can shock me still, and I definitely got that in this book.


Cons
I felt like the character development in this book was a little lacking.  The development of Madison herself was fine, but the supporting characters were deficient.  I had no idea who her friend Blake was, he just kind of popped up on the scene with no explanation as to who he was to Madison, what his story was, why he worked at a restaurant.  Was he the owner?  Was he the chef?  I had no clue about him at all and the same can be said for Serena.  There is no real description of her personality or really what her back story is.  It’s so important to make the supporting characters in a book to be just as real as the main characters because it adds more depth to the plot and the main character’s life as well.   I felt like I got to know J and Madison but maybe having flashbacks of their past or just adding more to their back stories would have helped to adding to the overall plot.

                Also I felt like the sentences were a little choppy and fragmented at times, and it kind of got on my nerves at a certain point and it prevented me from really getting into the book emotionally the way I like to.  I've read a lot worse than this book, so it’s not horrible just a little annoying.  I felt like instead of Madison’s story developing naturally the way you would find out about a real person, instead it was kind of laid out there for you immediately.  To me it kind of came off like she was being interviewed rather than letting her personality and past experiences come out naturally.  I get you are trying to lay the plot out and give the back story so as a reader we’re not completely confused as to what is going on, but the way it was done was too robotic and not human enough.



Overall
               
Great story and very likable characters.  There was tons of stuff going on in this book so I never really felt bored reading it. I love jaded female leads because I can get sucked in more emotionally into the story if the character is more relatable.  Definitely some very hot scenes, and my favorite one takes place in a dressing room; who doesn't love public sex? 

                The flow of the book wasn't great, some of the chapters didn't really pour from one to the other smoothly.  The supporting character development was just really bad, and at times I felt like the conversations with supporting characters made no sense at all.  I would've liked to have seen more details about the apartment Madison lived in, the club house, J’s house, the environment around them generally was lacking in details.  I liked to feel like these characters are real people but it’s hard to do that if I can’t really grasp their surroundings because where they live and spend most of their lives adds to who they are.  Also there weren't tons of details of how Madison herself looked, all I really knew was she had long legs and long brown hair, and it kind of stopped there. 

                This is the first book in this series and I’m definitely compelled to read the next one, I just hope there will be more details in the second book and really make these characters more tangible to the reader.  Like I've said before I love motorcycle club books, and this series is no different I’m interested to see what Scott’s story will consist of.   

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