Another
Mazzy Monday
Tawnee Mountain #1
By Savannah Young and Sierra Avalon
Genre: Adult, Contemporary Romance
Out January 6, 2014
Synopsis
When the wealthy
and charming Drew Graham walks into the Tawnee Mountain Resort where I work and
offers me a lucrative part-time job it sounds too good to be true. I just have
to pretend to be his fiancée until he wins the election for Governor and then
we can go our separate ways. It seems like an easy way to make a hundred
thousand dollars…until his brother, Austin, returns from Europe and moves in
with us. And I’m completely overwhelmed by my attraction to my fake fiancĂ©’s
rebellious younger brother.
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Not that I haven’t
been accused of being cocky myself. Okay, maybe I’ve been called an asshole on
more than a few occasions. But charming I am not. My brother is great at
telling people exactly what they want to hear. It’s a skill that will serve him
very well in politics. I’m more of a say-what’s-on-my-mind kind of guy. I’m
always straightforward and honest. I tell people what I think they need to hear
even if they don’t want to hear it.
“Austin Graham,” my
big brother says when he finally spots me. He excuses himself from the small
group of would-be campaign donors and heads in my direction. “The rebel without
a cause returns to the roost.”
To my surprise my
brother grabs me into a hug. I reflexively look around the ballroom to see if
there are any photographers snapping shots of us. That’s the only reason I
could see Drew giving me such a warm greeting. We didn’t exactly part on the
friendliest of terms when I left the country.
“I take it Dad
summoned you back to the States to help with the campaign.”
“Help is really a
strong word. I get the impression I’m needed for publicity photos. He says he
wants to show the press that our family is strong and united. You are running a
family values campaign, aren’t you?”
My brother glares
at me. Then after a few moments of being at the center of his arctic stare he
says, “Nice suit.”
“It should be. You
probably paid top dollar for it.”
“I thought it
looked familiar.”
“Suits and I don’t
really get along.”
“I guess that means
Dad hasn’t talked you into getting a real job yet.”
“I’ve had plenty of
real jobs all over Europe. Everything from milking cows to fixing motorcycles.
Whatever odd jobs people had in exchange for a hot meal and a warm bed.”
Drew shakes his
head. “Sometimes it’s difficult for me to believe we’re products of the same
two parents.”
“You were there
when I was born,” I remind him.
“And you were
stubborn and willful from the moment you took your first breath. Some things
never change.”
“I need a drink,” I
announce. Drew, always being the perfect politician and everything his
constituents want him to be wrapped in a picture-perfect package, rarely drinks
anything but water and orange juice. I, on the other hand, imbibe on a regular
basis.
“Maybe stick with
one,” he suggests. “Nurse it for a while.”
“Yes, Sir,” I give
him a cheesy little fake salute.
As I approach the
bar I see a gorgeous little blonde serving small cups of wine to several
middle-aged women wearing matching conservative navy blue suits and single
strands of white pearls around their necks. They all have their hair cut short
and look like they’ll be absolutely no fun even with a little wine in them.
Once the women of
the blue suit brigade have cups of wine in their hands they make their way over
to my brother. As I wait for the bartender to acknowledge me I’m a little hurt
that she doesn’t even glance up at me when she asks me what I want. Then I
remember I’m wearing one of my brother’s stuffy suits and that I probably look
just like another one of the conservative jackasses at the fundraising event.
This girl looks
like someone who prefers a more down-to-Earth kind of guy. If I had on my
everyday attire: leather jacket, well-worn jeans and black biker boots, I think
I’d get her attention in a heartbeat.
“Beer,” I say,
trying to will the blonde to at least glance at me once. But to no avail. She’s
all business, serving drinks then taking the next person’s order.
“We’ve got Miller,
Bud, and Coors.”
“Miller.”
She nods and fills
up one of the small cups with beer. It’s not even the size of a Dixie cup.
Maybe half as large. “Got anything bigger than that?”
She shakes her
head. “Sorry. It’s complimentary. You can have as many as you like.”
I hold up the
ridiculously small cup. It would probably take about ten of these before I even
felt a buzz. “Thanks.”
She nods, but she’s
only half paying attention to me. When I glance down at her name tag I see her
name is Mazzy. Unusual name. I’m completely intrigued. Not just because she’s
beautiful with a smoking hot body to match, but there’s something about her
that’s different.
Most girls fall all
over themselves to get my attention when they figure out who my family is.
Being from a wealthy and well-connected family is like an aphrodisiac for most
women. I look down to make sure I’m still wearing my name tag and it’s
definitely there. This girl just hasn’t even bothered to take a look at
it.
Two guys are now
standing behind me so I know I have to let her serve them, but I don’t want to
move from this spot. I just want to look at her for a few seconds more. I like
watching the way she moves. She seems so carefree and comfortable in her body.
As carefree as I like to pretend to be I know I’m really just a mass of
insecurities and compensative tactics.
“Anything else?”
she asks.
Your number, I want
to say, but what’s the point. I don’t plan on being in New Jersey any longer
than I have to. I promised my dad I’d stay through the election and that’s it.
Then my backpack and I are off to Asia.
I take my
ridiculous little cup of beer and head off in search of someone I might find
even remotely interesting to talk to.
As luck would have
it I run into my mother and her league of women voters. They’re all wearing the
same conservative blue suits as the blue suit brigade who were ordering wine in
front of me at the bar and they each have a tiny American flag displayed
prominently on their lapels. As soon as my mother spots me a look of disgust
overtakes her face. She can’t seem to control it whenever she sees me and I’m
not sure she wants to. She’s even less thrilled with me than my father and she
usually has no trouble expressing that displeasure to me. My only saving grace
is that I know she won’t rail at me in front of her supporters. She’s much too
shrewd for that. She’ll do her best to pretend I’m the perfect son in front of
potential donors and wait to condemn me in private.
I’m so glad I’ll be
staying at the lake house. My mother won’t consider venturing out to Northern
New Jersey this late in the season. When it’s less than seventy degrees she has
no interest in the lake house.
“Austin,” my mother
says as she approaches and places a quick peck on my cheek. “So glad you could
make it.”
The other women in
her small group are all smiling and eyeballing me, even though they’re all my
mother’s age or older.
I down the rest of
my beer and stare into the empty cup. “I think I need a refill.”
My mother expresses
her displeasure with a harrumph, but then quickly replaces her grimace with a
broad smile. Hers isn’t as rehearsed as my father’s or brother’s, but it’s
equally phony.
“When you come
back, Mrs. Lexington has an opening in her firm that might be of interest to
you and she’s already said she’d love to talk to you about it.”
“Great,” I lie as I
loosen my tie. I’m already feeling trapped and the stupid material around my
neck isn’t helping matters any. I can’t even remember the last time I wore a
tie.
What
I Loved
This was a really cute book that was a lot of
fun to read mixed with an original overall plot idea. I love that this wasn’t your typical rich man
falls for plain poor girl story, and I loved that the main love interest turned
out to be the black sheep brother not the dapper politician. Also, I really enjoyed the main character
Mazzy, she’s an easy person to relate to and a hard worker, which made me
respect her a lot. I loved the chemistry
between her and Austin from the very beginning, and that lead to some pretty
hot scenes which I thoroughly enjoyed.
The same can be said for Austin, definitely a very hot character that
made it easy to love him. I like the
fact that he separated himself from his crazy family and didn’t want to spend a
dime of their money and stood up for Mazzy when no one else would. Austin is definitely a very charming fellow
that made this book very fun to read.
Not
So Much
Although this was a great book, the flow for me
was just too fast and because of that I felt like there were a lot of holes in
the plot. There isn’t very much detail
of anything when it came to the backgrounds of each scene. I have no idea what kind of colors are
involved in Mazzy and Suzie’s apartment, what the entire lake house looks like,
or even what the resort looked like.
There was no character development when it came to Drew as well, I get
he’s not the main love interest but there were very rarely any scenes of Drew
and Mazzy together and when there was they said maybe two sentences to each
other. It’s kind of insinuated that they
talked more to each other but you never got to see it or experience it. There
should’ve been more of a plot line when it came to Drew and Mazzy themselves or
at least throw in one lengthy conversation the two of them had.
Also there were times when I felt like
the story was being talked at me, rather than me experiencing the story. The sentences seemed halting at times and
sometimes didn’t match the flow of the scene or paragraph. Scenes would often end just too soon for me,
and then there would be no follow up and follow through which kind of annoyed
me.
To
Sum it All Up!
The overall plot of the story was awesome, and I
really enjoyed the interactions of each character in the story. Austin and Mazzy are awesome and I loved
watching them fall in love. I just felt
that the sentences were very fractured and structured in such a way that I felt
like they were telling me the story rather than me being a part of it. The sequence of events went too fast for me
and left a lot of holes in the overall plotline and left out a lot of
details. I’m from New Jersey so it was
great to read a book that took place there, and since I’m a political science
major as well it definitely made this book a lot of fun to read. There aren’t tons of political romance
stories out there so I was happy to discover another one. This book could’ve been about 100 pages more
in my opinion by just adding more detail and developing the characters more.
Overall though, this was a great fun story to read, very light and easy not
dark at all, so if you’re looking for a happily ever after with some very cute
scenes than this is the book for you.
Meet the Author
USA TODAY
Bestselling Author Karen Mueller Bryson writes under four pen names. This is
her first novel co-written by two of them.
Savannah Young's stories take place in fictional Old Town, which is very much like the rural Northwest New Jersey town in which she grew up. She is the author of the four-book Wilde brother's Old Town Country Romance series.
Sierra Avalon's stories have a little sass and lots of spice. She is the author of Always Rayne, which is the first book in the Always, Sometimes, Never series.
Savannah Young's stories take place in fictional Old Town, which is very much like the rural Northwest New Jersey town in which she grew up. She is the author of the four-book Wilde brother's Old Town Country Romance series.
Sierra Avalon's stories have a little sass and lots of spice. She is the author of Always Rayne, which is the first book in the Always, Sometimes, Never series.
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